10 May 2007

A day so empty

A day so empty
like being nine and trying
to understand space.

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Pete, I've been quietly lurking and enjoying your haiku blog... this is one of my favorites yet.

11 May 2007 at 22:13  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wonderful. *cries*

12 May 2007 at 09:30  
Blogger Pete Green said...

Funnily enough, I'm not all that keen; it's one of the poems where I seem to let a bit of emotion in, and I'm trying not to do that. But thanks for the comments - maybe I'll rethink...

15 May 2007 at 18:17  

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